I would like to have someone with a creative eye help me with my squeeze. It's so bad I would be embarrassed to use it. Matthew said in his introductry DVD that copy is very important--which I am aware of. The copy is ridiculous! I can give you my ideas and we can go from there.
Also on the page where the prospect fills out their information there is only one line for the address, which means only the street adress can be put in--not the city or state. Since I'm investing in Atlanta the city is very important to me. I can't believe someone else didn't complain about that.
Thanks for ant help you can give me
Sincerely
Jean Pizzoferrato
From: Financexaminer
12/03/2009
Hi, welcome Jean to REI! This is a great place to get answers, connect with investors and learn the ropes. If you have any questions or want a creative eye on a deal, feel free to contact me. Good Luck, Bill
12/06/2009
Hi Bill
I would like to have someone with a creative eye help me with my squeeze. It's so bad I would be embarrassed to use it. Matthew said in his introductry DVD that copy is very important--which I am aware of. The copy is ridiculous! I can give you my ideas and we can go from there.
Also on the page where the prospect fills out their information there is only one line for the address, which means only the street adress can be put in--not the city or state. Since I'm investing in Atlanta the city is very important to me. I can't believe someone else didn't complain about that.
Thanks for ant help you can give me
Sincerely
Jean Pizzoferrato
12/03/2009
Hi, welcome Jean to REI! This is a great place to get answers, connect with investors and learn the ropes. If you have any questions or want a creative eye on a deal, feel free to contact me. Good Luck, Bill